Week 5.2

 Interim 2

These were the posters I presented for the second interim.

The feedback that I decided to listen to from this page were the comments that said try flipping the tampon, as well as moving some of the body copy up to become subtext and making the chip packet look more 3D. I may also try the tomato sauce idea for the fish and chips poster.

Overall I'm feeling quite comfortable with my work and only have a few small things to try/change.

Edits

Here I am trying to figure out how to get some subtext up onto the poster without ruining the entire composition.

I ended up with this version of it. None of them are making me super happy but I do think that it is important to not bury this fact in my body copy.

Here I tried flipping the tampon upside down. I did try tucking it into the chip packet but I didn't like that at all.

Reverting back to the right way up tampon but flipping it so that the string was on the other side. Ellie suggested this to me because of the way her eyes move across the poster. After she pointed it out I realised that she was right and that I do agree with her.

Putting the subtext onto the chip packet. Again I'm unsure about this, but I can't figure out if it's because I don't want to change my poster that I'm already happy with or because it actually isn't working.